Title: Allison in Wonderland: An Erotic Novel
Author: Ray Sostre
Genre: Adult, Erotic Fantasy Adventure
Published: January 31, 2017
Author: Ray Sostre
Genre: Adult, Erotic Fantasy Adventure
Published: January 31, 2017
 In this parody to the children story, there’s an adult twist – an erotic fantasy adventure. Allison Woodward and her step-brother, Steve Robbins, are pulled out of their world and into separate realms of Wonderland, where they not only discover a strange world but encounter the chilling events that unfold. What summons them to Wonderland will also summon them to fall in love in an unusual way, and while that love wouldn’t be explainable in their world, it is their only chance to survive Wonderland, along with the help of their Wonderland friends. |
BOOK REVIEW
I'm always looking for adult versions of children's fairy tales and when this one came along I just had to read it.
In this tale, Allison and her step brother Steve live in California and won't admit their attraction to each other. They spend so much time fighting each other and trying to get one over on each other.
That's until they are pulled are pulled into alternate realms and go on an erotic adventure in Wonderland where the Red Queen and Lord Knave rule with brutality. The Red Queen prepares herself with a war with the White Queen by draining the life out of capture subjects.
It turns out that Allison and Steve are the keys to defeating the Red Queen and Lord Knave, but they have to get over their squabbles and admit their love for each other before that can happen.
As an erotic fantastical adventure this is done well, We certainly get pulled into one orgy after another. Yeah!
But I had one big beef with this story. I didn't like Allison or Steve. Usually I don't mind whether I like the characters when I read erotica because all I'm interested in is the action. But that is for stories that are usually shorter. This book was 251 pages long. And to read something this long, you have to have a certain empathy to the characters. I had none for these two. Allison was a brat and Steve was a prat. I just couldn't connect with them.
That said, I have to admit that this author writes good erotica and I would read him again. If you enjoy erotica then, I'm happy to recommend this.
Disclaimer: I volunteered to review this book.
“My first book by this author and admittedly, I only chose to buy it for my obsession with Alice in Wonderland. I was so amazingly surprised with this book. Erotic for sure, but with such a fabulous story line. I would recommend this book for anyone that loves a step up in romance, even if Alice isnt your favorite character.” 5 stars ~ Amazon Customer
“I've read a couple of Mr. Sostre's books before and thoroughly enjoyed them. With this parody of Alice in Wonderland, I wasn't sure what to expect. I was hooked by the end of the first chapter. Not only did Ray turn it into one of the hottest erotic stories I've read in a long time, but he made the back story compelling and interesting enough to keep the reader involved. Only once did I put the book down in order to take a small break from the erotic heat. I loved this book and if you enjoy reading erotic fantasy, I highly recommend it.” 5 stars ~ Vampire Luvr on Amazon
Back at the tea party, Allison proceeded to pour another cup of jasmine tea. Despite her need to go, she was enjoying the delicious tea and treats of sandwiches and cakes. Everyone at the table continued to talk and share fond memories of Dormouse and Mr. Rabbit, except Allison, since she had no clue who they were, but she learned how much they were the life of the party a long time ago.
While Allison listened to the conversation, she felt Willow’s hand slide across her hip, which for some reason made her nipples grow hard under her teddy and a delicious ache grow in her core. Never before had she felt turned on by another woman, but Willow’s touch had seemed to hit the right nerve in her body. If this was another woman, Allison would’ve fended her off, but for some reason, she wasn’t protesting the way Willow was touching her.
The Willow leaned over and asked, “How did you like the tea?”
Allison turned to her and said, “It’s very good. In fact, this is the best tea I’ve ever tasted in my entire life.”
“Would you like me to show you the garden? I’m sure you’ll like the smell of the flowers, and I can tell you’re getting quite bored with this conversation, since you didn’t know who these men were.”
For some reason, Allison couldn’t say no, and the way Willow slid her hand up her thigh, Allison was feeling moisture growing inside her. Why couldn’t she say no? Allison couldn’t because she was feeling turned on by her.
“Sure,” Allison obliged when she moved her hand on top of Willow’s, and the two got up from their seats and walked away from the table.
The table didn’t even ask where they were going; they just kept talking. Allison was taken to a lush garden filled with flowers of lavender and jasmine. The smell was very euphoric; a fresh smell of spring in the air.
“I have to say,” Willow said, “you have very soft hands.”
“Thank you.”
The two continued to walk inside the garden where they sat on a bench together, surrounded by tall flowers that secluded them from everyone else. For some reason, Allison felt a knee-weakening feeling growing. She had never been with a woman before, nor ever kissed one, but Allison was willing, since the moment felt right. She felt comfortable, and the way Willow was caressing her hand had Allison’s heart beating really fast.
“Um, Willow, there’s one thing I need to tell you.”
“What’s that?”
“I’ve never … kissed a woman before.”
Willow was intrigued, “Really?”
“Um, yeah.”
Then Willow inched closer to her. “Why don’t you relax; I promise to make you feel comfortable.”
 New York born, East Coast raised, and West Coast bound
Writing erotica happened by accident in the summer of 2010. That same year, he established AfterDark Online, a site for erotic authors. He lives in Nevada with his long-time girlfriend, is an avid listener of electronica, and enjoys writing and publishing articles. He jokes: “I’m always looking for writing material.” |
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Thank you so much for the wonderful review. I really appreciate your true, honest review in the book, and while you may not care for the characters in the story, I'm happy that you enjoy the flow of the story.
ReplyDeleteYou're welcome, Ray.
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